All The World's A Stage

All The World's A Stage

A Poem by [email protected]!
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Emotion Workshop poem for Creative Writing:)

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Mechanical

Like the touch of cold, gray metal

It happens when individuality is denied

The sound is reminiscent of a muffled heartbeat

Mechanical

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This reminds me of what I used to believe the band "Nirvana" was origionally about. I don't know whether people share my opinios about a band being "about" something or whether the songs they write are simple individual pieces of music but I believe the concept applies to many parts of life from a philosophical aspect. Maybe your intention was not for the reader to read too deeply into this,however, this piece accomplishes doing just that in so few words, which is a mark of good writing, in my opinion. This is very Cloak and Dagger. Nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This reminds me of what I used to believe the band "Nirvana" was origionally about. I don't know whether people share my opinios about a band being "about" something or whether the songs they write are simple individual pieces of music but I believe the concept applies to many parts of life from a philosophical aspect. Maybe your intention was not for the reader to read too deeply into this,however, this piece accomplishes doing just that in so few words, which is a mark of good writing, in my opinion. This is very Cloak and Dagger. Nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I see a parallel with working a 9-5! Short and sweet... as usual. Nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmmmm...industrial...i want more!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like how this poem speaks about the lack emotion that the mechanical has. it is a tool, a man-made object that seems so alien for its loss of warmth and mercy. perhaps i am projecting my own meaning but is that not the mission of art? i am an advocate of short poetry and this piece delivers. great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haunting and lovely! Wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Heather, I'm twenty, future author and english teacher, highly analytical, The Vampire Diaries, A Tale of Two Cities, both classic and modern literature, the Victorian era, Coco Chanel, ext.. more..

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