Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by Jas Alejandrino Ramos
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Are you a Diana? "Every girl deserves to be treated like a princess"

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“I don’t know how to put this, every time I saw her face I feel suddenly inspired. The spark on her eyes are like shooting stars, make my wish come true and her smile is contagious, makes me want to smile even on a bad day. "

"But when I saw her with someone else, I feel the pain that stuck in my brain. I feel all the emotions running through my vain. Broken and can’t move on. Tears stream down my face. "

"But when I saw the tears on her eyes, it felt like snow in summer wish that I could give her my sweater. The sufferings she had that keeps on coming back and going in circles. And now I feel torn, so torn for her. I need her, the muse that I seek in every masterpiece I dream. And she needs someone to share her miseries and tell her that she is loved."

"But she has built boundaries that I don’t know if whether the rope that I created towards her is still worth climbing for or should I just cut it off. Even in all the confusion, I still love her for she is DIANA.” (while Zayn is painting something on a big portrait)

read it on Wattpad:

http://www.wattpad.com/50919084-diana



© 2014 Jas Alejandrino Ramos


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Intriguing prologue here. Of course longer writing is a hard sell, this really is the "poetry cafe' for whatever reason and getting people to jump to another site to continue is even more difficult but this does what a prologue should do. it makes the reader curious. Its well crafted and succinct and poses all types of questions. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas Alejandrino Ramos

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)


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Intriguing prologue here. Of course longer writing is a hard sell, this really is the "poetry cafe' for whatever reason and getting people to jump to another site to continue is even more difficult but this does what a prologue should do. it makes the reader curious. Its well crafted and succinct and poses all types of questions. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas Alejandrino Ramos

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very touching poem and poignantly felt as I read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas Alejandrino Ramos

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A. Amos

9 Years Ago

Will do my friend...
Jas Alejandrino Ramos

9 Years Ago

Glad to hear from you my friend
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

We are here to support each other, so why not!
"But she has built boundaries that I don’t know if whether the rope that I created towards her is still worth climbing for or should I just cut it off. Even in all the confusion, I still love her for she is DIANA.”
I very good introduction. You gave enough to make the reader want to know more. I wanted to know more about Diana. Thank you for sharing the excellent introduction.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jas Alejandrino Ramos

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review :) i hope you continue reading it as i publish chapters

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Jas Alejandrino Ramos
Jas Alejandrino Ramos

Pampanga, Philippines



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I am a Bachelor of Arts in Communication graduate who loves to write poems and novels...I have also a passion for interior designing. more..

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