All The Hurting

Tears fall from my eyes

I just can’t help it anymore

I am rejected and neglected,

Feels like my heart has been broken,

Has been abused and damaged in all the hurting

 

All this burden in life

All this loneliness,

Loneliness that is too much for me to take,

That if I take it I might get insane,

Insane in all the pain that this heart is feeling

 

Please help me God

I am torn apart inside

As time goes by,

And as people pass by and hurt me,

People that I still love even in all the hurting.

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Awards

Painful

Oct 9, 2010

• SICKNESS
• All The Hurting

Fifth - Amazing

Nov 17, 2010

• Hurting The One You Love
• All The Hurting

Third Place

Nov 29, 2010

• Dark Love Poem
• All The Hurting

runner-up voter preferred love poet

Mar 7, 2011

• Can love be real?
• All The Hurting

Was tearing up. 2nd

Mar 17, 2011

• Make Me Cry.
• All The Hurting

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A heartbreaking read with a defiant and almost uplifting ending. In the sense that they can hurt you but they can't ruin your spirit and despite all the hurt you still love them and life. That's a powerful and thought provoking ending. This piece is very good however I'd try working on opening your poems with more intriguing and unusual opening lines. Rather than saying in the opening line 'Tears fall or I am grieving or weeping. Let the rest of the poem say that in the emotions you express later in the poem. You need a less obvious opening. That said you write well.

[Arya_the_elven_lady]

I think that this poem deserves a medal. You certainly should win a contest if you submit this. The only thing is that you need to correct a few spelling goofs.

[Matthews Reggie]

the perfect expression of depression..... emotional and hurting....

[Brad]

ouch, this one cuts with serrated edges

[JelliFyshKissUs]

This deepest hurt is disappointment. A pain caused by ones we love. And your pain dives deep into the readers hearts. The beautiful thing about pain, though, is that it heals when you are ready for the healing. Feel better my dear.

[Tomi]

I found out you could be lonely in the midst of many people, I also found you could get some peace even while being alone. There is a longing within us all for something deeper that only few of us ever find.

I like these, it's simple but well expressed and the emotions very evident.

[My Fair Lady]

Broken hearts cannot properly mend until we turn it over and critically look at what broke it in the first place. The turn over itself is often so painful that only the very courageous can do it, many would rather live in the agony than face it. This is a beautiful and heart wrenching piece reflecting the turn.

[Geralyn Miller]

The agony is palpable, evident in every word. The pain will ease with time and age.

[Crinkle°]

we feel very well the high level of pain... almost a wail... especially at the end. I send you some good energy!