Now That You Broke My Heart

Now That You Broke My Heart

I’m crying and grieving,

Grieving for this heart feels nothing but hurt

But there you are,

Acting like you don’t me

 

What did I do for you to hurt me this so bad?

So bad like the way I want you so much

Can you tell me why?

Why you chose to break my heart

 

Didn’t you even notice?

Notice that I’m going to hurt,

This hurting that I just can’t hold any longer

That’s why I’m here,

Crying alone in my bed

 

If you could just see and feel me,

See that I’m crying a river of tears

Feel that I’m dying in this pain,

Pain that you brought to my heart

Now that you broke my heart.

 

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Awards:

Amazingly Epic

Jun 2, 2011

• Sad Poetry
• Now That You Broke My Heart

Awesome-tastic Poem

Jun 3, 2011

• Cry Me A River
• Now That You Broke My Heart

7th place - Now That You Broke My Heart

Reviews

[Zackery Alan Daley]

If this poem was not a genuine feeling, I would probably dislike it. It is quite repetitive and cliche, but is greatly out shined by an author's insides spilling into their own work. Very good in that aspect and I commend you for your honest portrayal.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

thank you for that honest critic! :)

[Jazique]

A broken is the worst pain and only love can heal it but, over time.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Nicely conveyed good job

[HopelesslyDevoted]

heartfelt and beautiful nice job

[Brad]

man, there is a lot of deep jagged heart there...know this feeling...hung out in that circle of hell for too long, peace to you

[Marie Harrison]

Such deep emotion and expression of devotion in this poem. The way you break it down, peeling the onion of pain. Exposing the welts of your soul that this heartbreak has caused you. Amazing.

[Ashesh]

A sad poem. I can completely relate to it because I have been there and felt same remorse as you mentioned here. thanks for sharing.

[ForTheWorld]

heart breaks!!! ouch it do hurt so much!!! so much that i really felt the pain flowed and pumped on my heart..

[YouoweYoupay]

Another heart-breaking poem. You might wanna re-read it and check for typos and errors. good write.