Pandemonium - Senryu

Pandemonium - Senryu

A Poem by Isimbabi
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I don't think this needs a description

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Ragged hearts hidden
Within caves of wondrous calm-
Pandemonium

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I love the paradox here, and such a well done piece. This would be identified as Senryu (same form as Haiku but not strictly about nature)---
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Isimbabi

1 Year Ago

Ah, thank you j. I'll definitely be changing swapping out the 'haiku' with 'senryu'. Thanks for the.. read more
....waiting to erupt.

That's what I think of after the word Pandemonium. Also the start of a great drama.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Isimbabi

1 Year Ago

Haha. True!! I guess it'll make the core for a great drama.... And yes, waiting to erupt is actually.. read more
This is fantastic, great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Isimbabi

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Haley. I really appreciate!!

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Added on December 11, 2020
Last Updated on January 30, 2021
Tags: haiku, chaos, emotion, poem, poetry, Senryu

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