Misty

In

a

dream

beginning

    to dim

I

could

have

sworn

I

felt

your

    lips

upon

    my skin

Reviews

[bobby]

Sweet and light.
Gentle enough to understand, the pain of losing someone you had hoped to have never lost.

[Seshat Nidaba]

Nice, one word lines huh, surprising that we rarely see that, ever.
though
that
does
work.

[Praiser]

when few words can embrace the moment
which feeing couldn`t tell who was there
when the person was the dream
why he wasnt there when you open your eyes
A unsolve journey
very nice!!!!!!!!

[Forgotten]

wow that was awsome
short but to the point

[I'owane]

you did

[Lily]

This is really good! Amazing job!

[africa]

Perfect. Was it a kiss hello ora kiss goodbye. Either way, very peaceful expression.

[Zeek4]

Wouldn't life be boring without dreams. It's amazing how so few words can leave such an impression.

[Lily Mae]

Soft like passions song... I really love this..and your profile is beautiful.. xx

[Wolfwind Words]

Like a ghost upon a midnight moment, sensations rush, embracing the spirit. Only to leave a warm glow upon the inner eye of memory, as morning takes it's first step to rise over a blanket soft.

Fantastic words Lady J! Tis good to let my eyes and mind gaze upon words crafted by an expert smith, who's fires still burn brightly! :)

Wolfie