Shine

The Creator overwhelms me...

Magnificent Star

Shooting out rays of light and warmth

From all angles

Who needs the sun

It is only a symbol of your

Fiery might and power

The truth cannot hide itself 

From your eyes

It doesn't even try

But the dark lies are exposed and 

Run from your brilliance

Author's Note

I love the feeling of the sun on my face. I love the feeling of the Son on my face.

Reviews

[Ganesh Kelagina Beedu S..]

A poem which leads the readers to the sanctum of their heart.

[FaeryQueen]

beauty!!!!!!!!!!! great imagery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Aphy!]

This feels like..sort of a motivational poem. Like...you're telling someone (the sun) to shine it's light and release it's true potential. I loved the flow and the simplicity of it. The word play was also good. Got me thinking about a lot of things. Thanx for sharing this lovedly piece. My favorite read of the day. Keep writing.
Aphy

[Jo]

Thanks for your encouragement.

[Insight "MH"]

A wonderful write. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.

Insight.

[Jo]

This is the first time I have shared my poems. Thanks for reading and commenting!