inner freak

draft..

she was known as the freak of the town 

known for the things she said, and the way she portrayed herself

but she had a secret that could freeze time, a secret that would blow your mind 

mentally a freak, but physically a saint, how so, you may ask ?

 she was one that could fool you and could have a man eating out of her hands 

seductive, captivating hard for any to resist 

a real work of art, painted so perfectly she was one of a kind 

most certainly rare, she was so fresh so pure 

she would leave men stiff and always wanting more 

she had a limit and could never cross it 

i mean how could she 

she was only a virgin after all 

sexually frustrated she wanted to try them all 

but she still believed in sex after marriage 

a real prince charming with a horse and a carriage.

Reviews

[Daniel Eckert]

A very strong poem; reads like a rap song! Very seductive too. I like it, I like it a lot!

[JoceMaria]

Thank you for taking time to review this piece :D as i did music i have a tendency of writing as i was to write a music piece.