betrayal

betrayal

A Story by JoceMaria

sliced my heart to pieces
Pain so deep, whole body paralyzed
I can't breath, can't speak, slowly fading away.

Still breathing, blood everywhere, you stand facing me in the eyes as i take my final breath, heartless feerless, ice cold, shivers down my spine, known you particularly my whole life, lifeline slowly fading away i realize my whole life was all a lie
like the films you see, and i played the best part, of being the fool that believed in your every word, your every dream

© 2013 JoceMaria


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Yet another very good piece! Keep em coming!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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JoceMaria

10 Years Ago

Thank you, much appreciated :D

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JoceMaria
JoceMaria

Lancashire , United Kingdom



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Sometimes, crying is the only way your eyes speak when your mouth can’t explain how broken your heart is... I write what comes to mind, and what i feel in that moment. more..

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