Single

Single

A Story by JoceMaria

undesirable that's what I've become
unattractive that's how i feel 
unapproachable that's why am here
still lonely and  hungry, for that love or even an affair
for that touch, is there anyone here... that could satisfy my every wish 
that could make me feel and never wish
a man that would know how to touch my every nerve, and have me shiver and weak at the knees 
that could kiss me uncontrollably, grab me by the weave 
until i scream, beg him to stop.. but really all i want him to do is carry on, and on, and on 
until i reach 
climax
 

© 2013 JoceMaria


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JoceMaria
still a working process, just wanted to see what you guys thought , and any feedback is much appreciated

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this is a good writing but you are not unattractive, undesirable none of that remember your body is just a vehicle transporting the soul it's whats inside the people there's beauty to behold

Posted 10 Years Ago


JoceMaria

10 Years Ago

thank you, these words really got me thinking, and the way i look at myself. one should love themsel.. read more
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Your words say it all really, this is a very honest and open piece of writing, I can relate to that feeling of not being wanted and feeling on the outside of things.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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JoceMaria

10 Years Ago

yeah sometimes when you catch yourself thinking you go into this dark place where you don't necessar.. read more

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JoceMaria
JoceMaria

Lancashire , United Kingdom



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Sometimes, crying is the only way your eyes speak when your mouth can’t explain how broken your heart is... I write what comes to mind, and what i feel in that moment. more..

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