I See

as i see my life through your eyes 

i see a vulnerable soul 

i see a life that worth much more

i see pain, hate and love 

i see it all

i see a strong women

that's contradicted and misunderstood 

i see dreams shattered by low self-esteem

i see me ready to fight ready to scream 

GET ME OUT

set me free 

would you want to be me?  

Reviews

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Very nice. Keep writing. Do u read my writing?

[JoceMaria]

thank you very much, i have never stumbled across you page but as from now i am definitely going to read :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. This poem drew me to a great treat of poetry.

"as i see my life through your eyes

i see a vulnerable soul

i see a life that worth much more

i see pain, hate and love "

Simply amazing...:).................

[JoceMaria]

thank you :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............................

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No1 wants to be some1 else, Its bad enough the way it is, Great write:)

[JoceMaria]

thank you :)
but there are people who are not happy with themselves and look at other as inspirations, so they can better themselves. sometimes its needed :)

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Yep still don't want to be them, Like I say bad enough being who you are. I see the looking but being is a whole new ball game:)

[JoceMaria]

hahaha i guess :)