heart on my sleeves

Thanks to Kingston junior for helping

Chocolate covers truths just to make things less bitter

 Still does not hide the pains from the victim of a wife beater 

velvet kisses from lips so soft and tender, make me yearn and crave for you all weather would you be mine is the question i ask, wearing my heart on my sleeves is not an easy task

Reviews

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Stains of thy heart, the travels I see, Abused of a light was a question to be, Covered in a slumber, will I wake again? The news travel fast before my broken skin. The true light shines that I know, Will I take it blow by blow? Good poem we all tend to wear our heart nothing wrong with that. We must face ourselves and see that one ask the questions will the light begun.

[JoceMaria]

Thank you for taking time to read :) and i absolutely love your style of writing, your an extremely talented writer

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Your welcome, I'm glad you see it among others but I don't right now. I am trying to find my balance with all that and I wont write again till I do. Your words are very greatful:)

[A. Amos]

Loved the structure here, great details, and awesome finish! Great piece...

[Mel Lisa]

"chocolate covers truths just to make things less bitter" this is so true. I am addicted to chocolate for that reason lol. love how you formulate your thoughts into words. exposing one's vulnerability, its lovely.