Game Over

One day you are mine

Then suddenly it´s like you never were

You take a lot, but never give

I don´t know if you ever will

I try not to, but I care

You have to tell me where we go from here

I love a girl, but I don´t know her

I´m in deep, sinking lower

If it´s a game you’re playing

Game over.

Reviews

[Courtney]

I really liked this one. So simple yet so deep and meaningful to get your point across. I love your writing! Keep it up! :) thanks for this beautifully tragic piece xx

[Johanna]

Sorry for way late answer, but thankyou :) your review made me happy :)

[LaVonneTheLovely]

This is beautiful and Relatable! :) I love it.

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

[LaVonneTheLovely]

You're welcome!

[ScottWinchester]

Yes, keep the poems up, don't delete them :) They're sad as roses, but they are well done. Especially this one, I think this is the best of the two; it's very honest and clear.

Super job ;)

[Johanna]

Sad as roses, what a lovely term! is it a normal american one? :) I agree with you.. but I think maybe I´ll take the other one down..it just dosen´t feel right, I think I´ll just rewrite it a little and then put it up again. :) thanks Scott :)

[ScottWinchester]

I made up "sad as roses" as I wrote that comment lol... glad you liked it :)

And you're most welcome :) Your poems are a delight, so no thanks are necessary.