Dust

Just a poem.. which means my thoughts and feelings mixed together..

Hold my hand

Until the fear turns to dust

You understand

You´re the only one I trust

Hold me close

Until the sun is over the house rows

And keep holding me tight

Even then

 

Feel by heart

Slowing it´s pace

Because I´m in your arms

Because I´m looking at your face

The world has lost itself

They say there´s no hope in our time

But you are mine

Always

 

I don´t know myself

What I want, what to do

But that´s okay

At least you know me

And I know you

As the sun set´s

And the light dies

I feel how close you get

You see the change in my eyes

Love hold my hand

Until the fear turns to dust

That fades with the wind

Just hold me

You are my everything

Reviews

[Neon]

Love hold my hand
Until the fear turns to dust
That fades with the wind
Just hold me
You are my everything

This above one stanza's really filled with the power, the passion of true-love. True-love means love's everything that never gives pain, never wrenches the body at all and never hurts the heart but love always keeps someone right into the arms of flowers in peace so that "Someone could feel the true beauty of love." It's a very delightful smooth lovely and a very soft melodic piece as beautiful as you. Keep spreading the scent of yours every-where, Johanna!

May you get success very soon!

[Michelle Pietersen]

Very nice rhythm you've got here!!! Excellent job Johanna!! :))

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Smiles you have a lot of heart it shows here! I loved it:)

[Johanna]

Thankyou so much :))

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Well your welcome so much:)