I'm the reality

I'm the reality

A Poem by J.C. Rabanes

I'm the reality

I'm either good nor bad depends on your point of view.
I brought smiles nor deep tears in those eyes of every person.
Your heart is something that was affected by these words I wrote.
Reality is here, no matter what I'm always be here.

When you close your eyes with your mouth full of abomination.
You cried it out tonite but the pains still stand in your imagination.
Then you're right that reality really bites everytime it touches our happiness.
Reality helps you to decide and predict your future based on what you done today.

Reality helps you accepts the facts that not all things will be yours.
If and only if you can accepts it with all your hearts and forget all the pains.
Like a candle you shine bright than anyone, just tighten it up and you'll be fine.
Rest assured that those bad words nor things thrown against you will be nothing.

In this world full of challenges and trials of the strong.
There will be warriors ready to fight for your good.
Climbing alone is a suicide mission for the souls.
Live with reality and everything will be fine and in control.

© 2015 J.C. Rabanes


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"Reality helps you to decide and predict your future based on what you done today." I like this line; it tells me I better start doing something productive or fruitful. There's so much a person can do and yet so much they may not be able to. One person cannot be every person, and that's the truth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

J.C. Rabanes

7 Years Ago

...and thats reality..
thanks mam for reading my piece... ;)



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"In this world full of challenges and trials of the strong.
There will be warriors ready to fight for your good.
Climbing alone is a suicide mission for the souls.
Live with reality and everything will be fine and in control."
Life is a wild journey. Right or wrong we decide our place and journey. I liked the poem. It open the door to a long conversation.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J.C. Rabanes

7 Years Ago

thanks for the kind review... ;)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I love this. It is such an emotional and relatable poem and it is so well written! Flows wonderfully. Keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is powerful and very interesting.... I like the flow of this poem and the wording...well said and beautifully done ;))

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

not all things can be ours, so face up to reality and accept that which you have and be happy, sound philosophy my friend :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm having a hard time deciding what line is my favorite, because there are MANY awesome lines in this piece. This delivers a very powerful message. As usual sir, outstanding performance!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J.C. Rabanes

7 Years Ago

thanks for reading my piece... ;)
Yes so true, reality is the truth, sometimes we love it sometimes we hate it. Very good thoughts here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Reality helps you to decide and predict your future based on what you done today." I like this line; it tells me I better start doing something productive or fruitful. There's so much a person can do and yet so much they may not be able to. One person cannot be every person, and that's the truth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

J.C. Rabanes

7 Years Ago

...and thats reality..
thanks mam for reading my piece... ;)

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J.C. Rabanes
J.C. Rabanes

Cagayan De Oro, Misamis Oriental, Philippines



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I am a man with full of respect. I dream big and hope alot. I took up Engineering in our country. And the rest is a secret... :D more..

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