Soldier Freak

Soldier Freak

This day is cold as ice
Feels like dreaming on my own grave
Walking down on this old town
Hoping somewhere accept where I'll be

I said that I was fine, hope that I
I will fly like a bird, free in the sky
There are no sweeter than live in a fight
Listen to songs when no music plays in

I ran upon this lonely town
Calling my mama's name
Fighting like a patriot,
Crying like a baby
I am more of a soldier freak.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words and thoughts.
"I ran upon this lonely town
Calling my mama's name
Fighting like a patriot,
Crying like a baby
I am more of a soldier freak."
You left the reader with something to think about. Powerful words and thoughts in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Barbz]

The courage of a soldier, laced with the fear of a little boy. Lost in the fear of his future yet eased by the music in his head. Beautiful genuine feelings, easily relateable Barbz

[J.C. Rabanes]

thanks mam... :D