Forbidden Kiss

A short one.

Kiss these fool's lips
before I die
but when you do
forgive my cry

Author's Note

This poem used to be in a really old and nice font, but for some reason the new layout removed it, so I changed it to something else that I'm not 100% pleased with, but my options were pretty limited..

Reviews

[The Flawed]

Well who ever came up with the phrase "Less is more" must have read this fine poem,
As ever you do not disappoint my friend
But what do I know?
Very well done

Great way to express what a forbidden kiss is like! Four lines with a lot of power!

[waywithwords]

Four beautiful lines written with so much meaning and short and the sweetest yet. I loved it my friend Yuval.
HUGSxxxxAnne

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Excellent - poignant and succinct - who could ask for much more...as Mozart said, 'To talk well and eloquently is a very great art but to know the right moment to stop is an even greater one.' You have done just that. Thank you,
Light,
Siddartha

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

short sweet and to the point. a simply great write.