Forces of Nature

Forces of Nature

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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The ethereal glue of life...

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Bonds.
Invisible energy.
Tenous and strong,
Attraction,
Pulling closer,
Holding near.
Atoms.  People.  Solar systems.
The most basic ethereal glue.
Holding life as we know it together.
Electrons orbiting their core.
Planets revolving around their Stars.
Heart strings binding one to another.
Powerful energy contained.
Until bonds are broken.
Causing bursting constellations to flame.
Division, Fission.
Extinction without bonds.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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Man as microcosm of the macrocosm of the Universe... I like it. I REALLY like it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Now what does Fission have to do with nature i mean went fission once really was a good sport to drink to but honestly thoose fish didntdo a dam thing to me well except that prick flipper yeah he's so talented hey i can spit water in peoples face no one gives me a tv show

Good luck in the contest my friend you know your good so why tell you just like i know im well Gonzo really doesnt that say enough

Well good post Judy hey ever find yourself deep in thought and lost in space with a chance of rain in the forefront of revolution
yeah me either cheers my friend
And watch out for crazy people ive herd theres tons of em here
Cheers Gonzo

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wisdom Einsteinian. An extremely perceptive and unique perspective.
You may be getting to damned smart for your own good, Judy. Now, there's every chance that the government will soon abduct you and force you to work, while naked, on some new kind of exotic weapon.
You must learn to appear almost challenged; write and behave more like Joe Biden.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Welcome Judy..to WC, and also thank you, for this poem, in which I see;
A very good compaction, of the enormity of force, found in the energy entity.
I like the way this covers life in its entirety...begining to end.
welldone


Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank you. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Looove it, So simple but complex in a way, great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Tags: Bonds, Science, Attraction, Division

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Judy Ponceby
Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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