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Potions

Potions

A Poem by Judy Ponceby
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A silly ditty for my friends daughter...

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Green Frog Legs,
Alligator Scale.
Rattlesnake skin
Mixed in a Pail.

Dust of fairy,
Drool of Troll.
Gather the magic
Read the scroll.

Stir three times
Round and round.
Drink it down
Three ounces and a pound.

Fall right over having a fit.
No pain, no gain reads that quip.
Pay the price in silver and gold.
From squatty toad child to nymph-like slip.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby




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Wonderful! I'm sure she loved it as much as the little girl inside me (from long ago) loved it. :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Even without the "eye of newt", this sounds like a powerful potion--at least good enough to entertain that little girl.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


You are fun! I did not see or read the first version, but what you did here worked! The witches stew, never did care for it, but you make me want to try it just for the buzzzzzzzzzzz!

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm fairly certain--back in the seventies--I drank a similar potion. Have yet to fully come to my senses.
You are extremely adept at creating humorous fantasy and children's fairy tales--and, by that I mean, you may be better at it than anyone on two websites.
No puffed-up compliment; just fact.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the movement of words. You could make a interesting potion with the mix in this poem. Thank you for the fun poem to read.
Coyote

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Posted 12 Years Ago


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sweet.
kids and friends were mixing potions in our garden last week. less exotic ingredients. mostly cut grass, chalk and mud. will read them this when they get home. a great poem for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Judy Ponceby
Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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