Forsythia

A spring haiku...

Gold Forsythia
Swaying in the warm Spring breeze
To Earth's melody.

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

Beautiful, well-penned Haiku.. I can picture this perfectly.

[Sel Whiteley]

A love the mixture of sound, sight and movement evident in this poem, makes it vivid with a lyrical intensity. Capturing the essence of the Forsythia, such a perfect flower shows your immense talent.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Forsythias and fushcias are my favourites next to the rose ; )

[ju]

ok- so now i have to own up to having a favourite shrub. because this is it- i love that early blast of yellow. never seen it in a poem b4. a very pretty, beautifully structured little write.

[Lily Mae]

This is so sweet... I can smell the flowers and feel the breeze with this beauty:) x