Lightening Bolt

Lightening Bolt

A Poem by Judy Ponceby


Split the hushed silence
Tear the very air apart
Sear the night sky bright.

© 2011 Judy Ponceby


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So well done! I can almost taste it!

Posted 13 Years Ago
Again, you engage so many of the senses in such succinct language. A love the strength of the verbs in this haiku and the emphasis provided by "very" is strong giving the poem an immediacy that is captivating.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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i agree you are very good at this

Posted 14 Years Ago
You master this form of poetry so well my friend ; )

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on April 20, 2011
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Judy Ponceby
Judy Ponceby

Swanton, OH



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