Iron

In response to www.oneword.com, in one minute.

The iron fist of control
holds domain over
the weak willed.
To those with heart
it presents a challenge,
a reason to fight,
to be inspired.
To be more than one would
be without defeating the resistance
of control over oneself.

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Yes, Judy, "Iron" is an important reminder. Unfortunately, people are easily fooled or confused when Iron wears a velvet glove. Control is control, however, no matter how "reasonable" the rationales may sound.
I appreciate this little poem very much.

[Patrick McFarland]

A call to arms if ever I heard one. "To those with heart it presents a challenge" indeed. Very nicely done Judy.

[Lily Mae]

And that's who I was telling you about...(starts the funny music in the background lol)xxx

[Ravyne Hawke]

Not sure what the other reviewer is talking about, but I think this poem is graciously written and bears truth. Excellent as always, Judy.

[Judy Ponceby]

I can't be "pissed off" at whatever it is you are referring to as I don't understand what you are referring to. thank you for the unusual reviews

[disconnectedspirit]

my calling is different then yours..my heart:0

[disconnectedspirit]

like callings are different, you need to remember that my heart..:) you might not have callings to be as Iron as I am

[disconnectedspirit]

lol..i am not being rude but maybe you will always be clay over iron? I am sure that will just piss you off further ROFL hehehe prophets will always be iron..