Floating in the Brizzillag

A collaboration with Methy Architabel.

Flutterbies and Scallywags
floating in a brizzillag.
Mumbliwags and prissywicks
swimming in a zig zag

All together, stroke, stroke,
the mumbliwags are swimming.
Dipping here and dipping there.
the flutterbies are skimming.

But not so much, those scallywags,
a lazy bunch they are...
and what about those prissywicks,
the laziest by far.

Bumblies are bumbling,
What very funny things.
Listing side to side are they
On their whimsy wings   

Prissywicks and Frakkyliks
tiring long before,
any of their counterparts
on the brizzillag shore

Flitting hither and thither, and way beyond yonder,
the flutterbies flitter all day.
It's a shame, don't you know, when it comes to playing,
only the flutterbies come out to put on a show. 

The rest are all lazy, and mindless or crazy 
and float around in the brizzillag.
If it were a contest, you know who would be the best,  
And Flutterbies would be winnin',  every blue ribbon.

Author's Note

12.27.10 A collaboration with a wonderful word warrior, Methy Architabel. :) Was great fun working with you! :)

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

"prissywicks" seriously we're not that bad lol..xx I love this Judy..you always bring a smile to my face.. xo

[Coyote Poetry]

I wish I could make words flow and fun to read like you can. The poem was fun to read. The words fell off my lips with great pleasure. No weakness in this excellent poem. Thank you for a enjoyable poem to read.
Coyote

[Rene Velez]

Nice collaboration, playful and whimsical in words and visuals, fun read...