The Rhythm of Love

Rocking to the rhythm

of your heartbeat.

The rhythmic rise and fall

of your breath

lulling me

as I lie 

slumberous

in your arms

To sleep, to dream

of life and love

To live and love 

together

To form

a life long 

bond 

of love 

and 

desire.

Reviews

[annie minus]

A great poem of love, I love how you've captured a simple moment between two lovers - it's those moments we should cherish and never forget. annie :)

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slumberous...what a wonderful word..and a enchanting read!

[Myenigma]

rocking to the beat is the best, especially the heart :)

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[Kenneth The Poet]

Straightforward, pointed, passionate. Love the last lines.

[Audrey Howitt]

Beautifully written Judy! The flow is wonderful and the piece feels soft and loving. Brava!

[Seshat Nidaba]

This reminded me of the sweetness of some of Elizabeth Barret Browning's poems, well done, very evocative and twinkly intimate.

[Richielee]

beautifully done with a bit of Judy mjagic thrown in : ))))

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great poem about love, and I love what it has to say and does it with a 'rhythm' that I love too :)