...dreams...

slipping silently into your arms
i look up into your warm eyes
and see heaven in them.

my eyes slide lower to those
warm soft lips that ask
softly to be kissed, to be
gently plundered of wet treasure.

i inhale as your warm hands lay
bare upon my arms and pull me into you.

my naked face tipped upwards
longing for your lips to slide
over mine, gently caressing the
curves of my mouth.

my breath warms your skin where
i breathe shallowly and quickly
in anticipation of fulfilling your needs

of fulfilling mine.

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

Sigh.. I remember something like this;) Beautifully penned passionate moments Judy.. I like to see this fire in you ..xo It's great for bra night..lol

[James Paulin]

Love surrenders and captivates. It rises above sexuality and also embraces it. Your sentiment captures this balance with a purity of romantic expression. Well done.

[Muse]

okay...this makes me want to daydream even worse than before.....soft sexy thoughts...you tainted my mind. ;)

[emmajoy]

Wonderfully romantic, wonderfully giving; no pretence, no preening passion, this is real and beautiful, simmering desire, it's how love should be, can be, if people remember why and how ..

' my eyes slide lower to those ~ warm soft lips that ask ~ softly to be kissed, to be ~ gently plundered of wet treasure. '

[WhiteWillow]

Sensual, descriptive, a pure joy to read. You have created a simply wonderful piece of art.

[Nobody.]

ah, sweetness! pure sweetness. those tender moments when all the noise of the world ends, and we can embrace our truest and most gentle selves in the protection and pleasure of love. the precious familiarity of honest kisses and long caresses. you capture the feeling purely and wonderfully throughout. to hell with writing and critiquing poetry! THIS piece is about LIVING LIFE; about LOVING. This touched me deeply. Made me more thankful for my own Someone. A true gift. I thank you.

Cheers!

[Tate Morgan]

Doesnt it just warm the heart to dream and feel in love.If this is a dream i like it.if it is a love of yours i say you deserve it Something about love it brings out the best and worst in us

[J Todd Underhill]

Soft and filled with feeling, another wonderful write slips with ease from your pen and graces these poetic halls. Well done!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Picture perfect romance, this was beautifully written!