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A Poem by Julia

goodbye....the word that i never wanted to hear from you...
i wanted to stay and try but you gave up...
nothing helps me feel happy...
only you could make me happy again...
but that would never come true...
all of our dreams...shattered...
our future will never happen....
all because i wanted the best for you...
for you to find someone else to make you happy...
i should have said "please stay with me"
but my tears and pain from my heart made me stay silent....
if only you knew how i felt...
or what i put myself threw for you....
all the pain and tears you'll never know...
just so you'll be happy...
while i stay crying and silent.....

© 2010 Julia


Author's Note

Julia
dont care about grammar....

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another sad tale from you. these pieces are more like open letters than poetry, but with a little tweak here and there, this could be some nice prose.
don't give up. you have gotten the courage to write your thoughts, now spice it up a little and you too can be a writer. lol

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Julia
Julia

Denton, TX



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all the writing are from the past before i gave up on writing...i was never good at being a writer and no matter how i thought i never could think of anything great.... Get .. more..

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