Love You Dorian

I had to leave my dad to live with my mom recently and this is me telling my little brother how sorry I am for having to leave him again

Didn't want to fail

Didn't mean to fail

but im a sorry sight

a horrid blight

I wish I could stay

but you'd pay

kus Im no good

and act as no brother should

I love you

you may neverr know

how much I do

but I need to find a flow

it kills me inside

but I cant hide

from my mistake

life is what you make

but remeber that

and when I get back

you'll be better than me

Jus wait and see!

Author's Note

hounestly I wrote that intending on giving it to him but i realized that he is young and it would be selfish for me to do that

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Good flow

Kus would be slang for "because I think" as KUS in Dutch mean a KISS, lol.... lovely to read your ramble of love.... I guess it's pretty heartfelt dear poet.

E.L.