Can I say Julie, "I rest me case"... too late already did.. yep, Julie is a "romantic poet"... its not just the words (though they reveal so much), but the underlying warmth and desire, that "smile of delight" and the longing seeping into creaves we only have hoped for in finding love.. and the last few lines: "your touch as soft as the sand beneath us/your breath as warm on my neck/as the dawn/
awakening your sleepy eyes/…as the tide rises once more" they just left me with a smile... wonderful poem Julie... ~~redzone
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Curt, Ok...you've got me now...yes a hopeless romantic..perhaps its the sound of the ocean or the so.. read moreCurt, Ok...you've got me now...yes a hopeless romantic..perhaps its the sound of the ocean or the song of the seabirds..who knows..
I do appreciate you and your friendship. Your comments always leave me with a smile.
:) Julie
Once again I find myself lost in how very beautiful your writing are you are a artist with a pen. When it come to expressing how very beautiful love is to you. I love that graphic you used. Hugs, Larry
Can I say Julie, "I rest me case"... too late already did.. yep, Julie is a "romantic poet"... its not just the words (though they reveal so much), but the underlying warmth and desire, that "smile of delight" and the longing seeping into creaves we only have hoped for in finding love.. and the last few lines: "your touch as soft as the sand beneath us/your breath as warm on my neck/as the dawn/
awakening your sleepy eyes/…as the tide rises once more" they just left me with a smile... wonderful poem Julie... ~~redzone
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Curt, Ok...you've got me now...yes a hopeless romantic..perhaps its the sound of the ocean or the so.. read moreCurt, Ok...you've got me now...yes a hopeless romantic..perhaps its the sound of the ocean or the song of the seabirds..who knows..
I do appreciate you and your friendship. Your comments always leave me with a smile.
:) Julie
this poem stayed on my mind..and probably will all day because it got me singing Led Zeppelin.."tangerine, tangerine, living reflections from a dream, i was her lover she was my queen, and now a thousand years between"
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ok...now I have the song stuck in my head too! Thanks for the great comment Jacob :) Julie
I felt the warmth of this piece, Julie...
You truly have painted the softest of whispers... so romantic!
Tangerine skies are gorgeous... especially enchanting when love touches you like this.
LOVELY write, Julie!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment Robbie. I look forward to reading more of your gorgeous poetry! .. read moreThank you for the wonderful comment Robbie. I look forward to reading more of your gorgeous poetry! :) Julie
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I enjoyed reading this colorful piece... beautiful, Julie!~xoxo~:)
Looking forward to reading .. read moreI enjoyed reading this colorful piece... beautiful, Julie!~xoxo~:)
Looking forward to reading more of your work of art.
Imagery of the shoreline and the sea....you know that makes a poem special for me. Oh, that rhymes, but it was unintentional! :) Dreamy and magical romance in this one, Julie. Just lovely. Lydi**
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I appreciate your wonderful comments Lydi. Thanks so much! :) Julie
I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's.
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