The Lightest Touch

The Lightest Touch

A Poem by MsJewel
"

"good morning"

"

photograph compliments of myopera

 

 

~~~

The lightest touch

 awakens the breaking dawn

 

ruffling the curtains of my imagination

opening the windows of my soul

to all that’s new

 

and I am a peach bloom rising

on a pastel breeze through painted skies

dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings

and sunshine smiles

 

awaken day

awaken me...

 

with poetry

~~~

© 2013 MsJewel


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Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry.
"and I am a peach bloom rising
on a pastel breeze through painted skies
dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings
and sunshine smiles"
The words took me to positive and beautiful thoughts and locations. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Good Morning! Thank you for you wonderful review of my poem! :) Julie



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The new dawn invigorates the soul and what a way to start the day off !

A terrific early morning citation !

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Tom and Good Morning! :) Julie
Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry.
"and I am a peach bloom rising
on a pastel breeze through painted skies
dew kissed and dressed in butterfly wings
and sunshine smiles"
The words took me to positive and beautiful thoughts and locations. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Good Morning! Thank you for you wonderful review of my poem! :) Julie
I used to live in a house with a back yard that I shared with the upstairs neighbors... we had a table and chairs and it was great to get up just before dawn and sit there with coffee in hand and wake to a new day... often I would take pen and paper and write down thoughts that would become poems; not as beautiful and "peach tasty" as your poem is, but it was a good way to start the day... I really loved your intro: "The lightest touch/awakens the breaking dawn". I think only someone who has sat and watched the sun come up really know this feeling, its "light touch"... I appreciate your writing this Julie, its just.... so deliciously "light"... ;o) be well Julie, ~~redzone


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

I run on the beach every morning just before the sun rises - and when it does - I have to stop for a.. read more
Splendiferous, Julie......

Posted 8 Years Ago


MsJewel

8 Years Ago

thank you Pryde! :) julie
Beautifully penned... I wake up in the morning and reading poetry is the first thing i do too after pouring myself a cup of coffee...a lovely piece Jewel...Rose:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Rose. I hope you're enjoying a beautiul day! :) Julie
and a beautiful morning it is awaken by beauty and grace great job
Ron

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thanks again for your lovely comments. :) Julie
a heck of a good way to wake up...with poetry...and this poem..
nicely worded piece...

makes me want to face a new day with a smile.

and my pen, of course.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day! :) Julie
To greet the day with poetry.....to rejoice in all that there is to see of nature's beauty....that is the right way to live! "ruffling the curtains of my imagination opening the windows of my soul" Such gorgeous imagery here! A wonderful poem celebrating life. Lydi**


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi. Have a lovely day my friend. :) Julie
Gorgeous opening lines, and they really set the tone for this gentle, idyllic piece...an inspiring way to start any day...well done Julie :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

8 Years Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Have a beautiful day my friend. :) Julie
kublakhan27

8 Years Ago

Same to you my friend :)

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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