Destiny?

~ a spring love scribble ~

 

art ~ Mark Arian

 

 

 

As if spring were your own…

 

the garden gate opened

and roses appeared

birds sang

              and clouds blushed in pink

                       scented of fresh linen

                                  and pastel painted dawn

 

 I fell into your arms

 

As ribbons of light

       tethered our hearts

                    beating as one

                        in perfect harmony

 

       Was it my destiny?

 

The garden gate opened

            and you found me

                       in springtime

Reviews

[redzone]

aaah Julie, you and your delicately delightful "springtime scribbles".. breath taking.. if I believed in fate and destiny then I would say that they were at play in your poem.. oh yes, very much alive and opening up the gate to your garden... ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are so great at writing these flowery ,lovely poems.Makes a girl sigh Jules :)

[MsJewel]

You are so kind. Thank you for the wonderful comment :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... Your poem blooms with
sweet passion's kiss of Spring's
tenderness...carressed by soft rain
and sunshines' embrace. A truly
enchanting garden where bluebells
ring and bluebirds sing.
Embraced by the light of love... Pat x

[MsJewel]

Your comments are beautiful poetry my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Matthew Bosko]

It's good to see a positive love poem, they are so hard to write because I feel, for a lot of us, being in that love we don't appreciate it until it's gone.

Nicely done.

[MsJewel]

Matthew, Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[Saddam]

As ribbons of light
tethered our hearts
beating as one
in perfect harmony.

With the nature you create a very different version of love story. I'm reading you lot to know you lot, you are one of my best poet. Great write dear.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Your comments always leave me with a smile :) Julie

[Frieda P]

This is such a delicate scribble, so light and full of promise, your ribbon'd reads are always golden Julie, sweet spring zephyrs emanate from your poetry. Luverly destiny indeed my friend. :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the very sweet comment Frieda :) Julie

[wordman]

it was your destiny,a lovely write and great picture loved the spring scene

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

Some delicious thoughts..
Gentle....bright...refreshing..
Spring is wonderful..

Scott

[MsJewel]

My favorite time of year Scott. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

Very pretty write.
:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for Spring. The artwork is amazing. A warm Spring day and a beautiful woman enjoying the sun. A good place to be. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Mark Arian is one of my favorite painters. His work is beautiful. Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie