300 Love Poems Later...

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ ron discenza

 

 

300 love poems later…

 

my heart still flutters

               not with butterflies

but with an indefinable yearning

a perpetual hunger

that could only be satisfied

with your kiss ~ resting gently upon my lips

 

as soft as a dew kissed dawn

as light as a whisper of breath

                       held

        in the wake of a lacy moon

 

a kiss…your kiss

                        soft, light

yet with the unspoken magic

that defines the word rapture

spilling with passion from the pen

               of a poet…this poet

whose heart still flutters

not with butterflies

 

                   300 love poems later…

 

              

Reviews

[Trace]

It is amazing the journey you have taken
I have so enjoyed all the poetry you have shared along the way.
this has a touch of that trail.... a tale of love.
a poets heart expressed so brilliantly with the stroke of her pen.

The most amazing thing is that each and every poem you have written
is extraordinary in it's own right. (Write???)

I love how this poem isn't really about the 300 previous poems
but about how the love is still there.......
and probably always will be.

This goes to the top of my favorites list.

HUGGS. ...Trace

[MsJewel]

The memory of him will always stay in a very special place in my heart. ..and you, my dear friend, have a special place as well. LY Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie.

[Trace]

I just love your sentimental side.
it brings out your best poetry.
and.... Thank you my dear friend. The feelings are mutual.

[s y e]

300 love poems later and the feelings are still there, the love is still and the need for him is still in your heart. You're quite the romantic, my favourite on this site!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the very kind comment and compliment. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Beautiful Jules.300 love poems later and you are still feeling the way you did when you wrote the first,this is all we can really hope for:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for supporting my little scribbles! :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and words. 300 love poems and the love is alive. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Ambra Celeste]

Tenderly written poem of a heart yearning the one it loves. I like this part: 'spilling with passion from the pen of a poet'. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for stopping by Ambra and taking the time to leave a comment. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[MOON]

Beautiful fragile write, romance and love who could tire....

[MsJewel]

Thank you Moon :) Julie

[wordman]

romance in the air people in love without a care spring is in the air

[MsJewel]

Your comment is like the first day of spring; beautiful! Thank you Ron :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write, very romantic and beautiful. Your very talented writer, nicely penned.

Kaze~ :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Daydreamer]

Very delicate and meaningful content!
I also love the interpretations I could make...
like- your heart won't flutter with butterflies for now
because it's not in the vivid love state
but rather a "missing" or wrenching state

[MsJewel]

I like your thoughts on my poem Manal. Thank you so much :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

Most welcome! I always love making my own interpretations of poetry!😍😍😍😍😍

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This so beautifully romantic… yes to hear how a person feels for you is always heart warming but nothing beats the feeling when you touch lips to lips or skin to skin.

[MsJewel]

A kiss can say it all.... Have a beautiful day my friend :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you… you too :)

[Shaquana Adams]

I love this. I simply love it! ^_^
-QuanaWana

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend! :) Julie