One Desire

One Desire

A Poem by MsJewel

Vickie Wade A

 

 

As free as the sky

and the sun washing over the edge of the brilliant tide


we move as water moves
joined together
stayed by what is, pulled by what will be
we glide

 

your body pressed against mine

glistening

on the passion that flows within us

we drift as one

 

one wave

one heartbeat

one desire

 

until the days last breath sails

over the seas soft rim

and we fall

 

as free as the sky

and the sun washing over the brilliant tide

~~~

© 2014 MsJewel


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You know that I love each of you, but together it is always such magical enchantment that flows across the page and takes your breath away.. This one is simply stunning.. It is as ONE voice whispering of what is, what was, and what will always be... exquisite imagery mixed with such affecting emotion... you can't help but feel the hearts beating as one and the passion overflowing.. I love this! amazing job you two!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and generous words April. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend.
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AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

you're welcome my sweet friend... (hugs)) back at ya!!



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You know that I love each of you, but together it is always such magical enchantment that flows across the page and takes your breath away.. This one is simply stunning.. It is as ONE voice whispering of what is, what was, and what will always be... exquisite imagery mixed with such affecting emotion... you can't help but feel the hearts beating as one and the passion overflowing.. I love this! amazing job you two!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and generous words April. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend.
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AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

you're welcome my sweet friend... (hugs)) back at ya!!
I love how you always put so much tenderness in your feelings for trace, they are so powerfully written showing your deep desires you have for him, who is the breath you breathe and the world you live in. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
onceloved

9 Years Ago

You are Welcome Julie.
A amazing job you two had done.
"one wave
one heartbeat
one desire"
The words above are poetry by themselves. Your words took me to good places. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. Have a beautiful day :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie.

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Added on September 6, 2014
Last Updated on September 21, 2014
Tags: love, romance, sensual, passion, fantasy, ocean, msjewel, trace, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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