Yesterday's Rain

Yesterday's Rain

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a sensual love scribble ~

"

 

               

art ~ compliments of pinterest

 

 

You knew me by heart

                                            and I loved you first

 

You touched me in the dark

no sun,

                          moon,

                                       nor starlight was needed

your eyes were covered with my words

my dreams with your fantasy

on a pillow, scented with desire

you found the place

                                 where winds rise

                                                and flowers burn…

 

Your love rained upon me

                                  silk to my skin

I caught every raindrop

                selfishly

                                 quenching my thirst

 

Touch me..

                                  like yesterday’s rain

and let the winds stir

as we recite each others poetry

and I will feel you

deep in my soul as you move me

 

I am free

I am a goddess

I run through a garden of flowers

                    passion blooming grace

 I am a quiver

                                wet in your rain

            and you will remember…

 

You knew me by heart

                                              and I loved you first

© 2014 MsJewel


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Amazing words.
"I am free
I am a goddess
I run through a garden of flowers
passion blooming grace
I am a quiver
wet in your rain
and you will remember…"
I love the words above. Create good vision and places. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your always encouraging comments. :) Julie



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"SIGH" just a sensual sigh for a sensual "scribble"... Julie I have missed a lot of your read requests and I am deeply sorry... I would be a very rich man if I had a penny for every time you say your poetry is "just a scribble", a statement that is a profound injustice to the poetic world... there's really only a few poets that I have read over the years who are as good as you when it comes to romantic and sensuous poetry... I want to steal this line: "You knew me by heart/ and I loved you first"... says so much I think...

sure glad I am finally reading these read requests... lol..

redzone

Posted 5 Years Ago


Incredible embraces in such a rain cloud of love seem those happy rain clouds never seem to go away Happy love and walking in the rain is so refreshing to the soul a love connection I'm sure you will explore The 12 Midnight curtains drawn Love endures throughout the night Loving each other in God's Sight.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Your love rained upon me
silk to my skin
I caught every raindrop
selfishly
quenching my thirst..

Marvelous write............

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you :) Julie
Wonderful imagery as usual. I love your use of spaces in the text to build the rhythm.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review :) Julie
I think I am in love with your poem, can I marry it? haha, this is excellent my beautiful friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing words.
"I am free
I am a goddess
I run through a garden of flowers
passion blooming grace
I am a quiver
wet in your rain
and you will remember…"
I love the words above. Create good vision and places. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your always encouraging comments. :) Julie
Yesterday's Rain is refreshing new and compelling. It delivers a love at a high notion and even higher emotions. It has heart Mind and soul beauty inside and out (I run through a garden of flowers passion blooming grace I am a quiver wet in your rain and you will remember
You knew me by heart and I love you first( Thrilling and a blessing in the same sentence wonderful verse.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you Jim. It is always lovely when you visit. :) Julie
Very imaginative and descriptive, I loved this write. This poem was executed beautifully.

Kaze~

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

7 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-))
so many beautiful lines in this. A sensual, gentle poem -and that last little line - actually tugs at my ornery heart. To love this much, is both beautiful and aching. This poem feels like a tribute to someone that one can no longer have - there is that "Goodbye" quality to it.


Posted 7 Years Ago


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You have all the key features here and the extents of your poetry really puts everything in its place. All in all it adds up to another classic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie

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MsJewel

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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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