Tonight

~ a romantic scribble ~

art by Thierry

 

 

Tonight…

I’m wrapped in bittersweet nostalgia

searching for words to describe

your sleepy kisses

                                                 on quiet nights

when starlight was the only witness to breathless promises

whispered as tenderly as your touch…

                                            silk to my skin

                                                 warming soft curves

                                  uncovering emotions

I could only dream of capturing

with amethyst skies

                                and silver stars

                                                 and poetic words beating to the sound of my heart

 

So tonight…

as the stars breathe goodnight kisses from a wistful sky

I’ll surrender to dreams of your touch

                                 on quiet nights

                 and forget everything else…

                                                           but you

Reviews

[ANTO]

I dont know how I missed this one Julie. I loved immediately the bubbles filled image - its so playful and sensual, and the way it set the scene.
I see how well you use formatting Julie - this is a masterclass - the way the reader is carried - gently to the next word - the next line. Letting each word settle like a snowflake.
Straight into my library this gorgeous write goes -
:))

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely review Anto. You are always so encouraging. I appreciate you! :) julie

[Lydia Shutter]

The poignancy of this one overwhelmed me....the longing, the regret, the sadness. Julie, while this is bittersweet, it is truly a lovely poem. Lydi**

[FREE_BIRD]

i wish that real come in my life soon...

[MCS]

Beautiful words, art and font!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

A beautiful promise to someone very special who will always be part of you.
A lovely romantic poem. :)

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Ana :) Julie

[GreenEyedPoet]

This is more then a scribble I think lol. It's a beautiful piece! And I loved this line - 'and poetic words beating to the sound of my heart'. :)

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[KelWriter]

That sent me to heaven and back again. I loved every wonderfully crafted line. Great work and keep writing!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Trace]

This is a poem that reaches right straight into my heart
And makes me think of times gone by
And what we would write with each other.

What a lovely poem full of longing and nostalgia.

HUGGS. . Trace.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet beast. I miss writing with you - take some time off work and play with me! Hugs, Julie

[Relic]

Your writings always have a "lightness" to them, whatever that means. The words are never dark. That's the only way I know to describe them. This is romantic indeed. Love it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate it very much. :) Julie

[nazia]

Seems more than a scribble to me... Its a passionate piece full of emotions and intensity of your feeling. the soul of one lover craving for the other. Sensual write :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

The touch of your romantic nature leaves a breathless stain on the soul. I embrace your poetry Julie with a big bear hug.

Regards,
Al

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much for the wonderful comment and the hug! :) Julie