Found

~ a love poem ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

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Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

~~~

Reviews

[Alessander]

This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Enchanted-Raven]

Gorgeous read Julie, enjoyed :) x

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[stars are far]

This is very nice and it had a great flow in which you feel like singing at certain mood. I loved this work :D

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Ana B.]

This is my favorite of yours....a shining gem among many treasures. Stunning dear Julie :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Ana. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Photo and words. Amazing place to know and be. Being intimate and fearless. Needed and wanted days and nights by the all of us. Thank you dear Julie for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you John :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Julie.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the brevity here...the sharpness of tone in a gentle breezy love echo.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Jacob. Thanks so much :) Julie

[andrew mitchell]

Yes passions rise in this exchange! Finely written Julie, I think the kettle is boiling in this one!

[redzone]

Julie, a big and deep SIGH and besides wanting to say 'you are found', I am glad you did not describe as a "scribble" cause even if it was a random thought written down on a lunch time napkin, smeared with a bit of mustard, this poem would take away the breath of all the romantics in the world and beyond and the collective sigh would reach back to the big bang... but in this poem there is nothing out of place, each emotion finely tuned in reveries and satin tides... if this isn't love, and sensuality and heart beats all in one then I am clueless when it comes to romance and love or anything for that matter... I seriously hope you know just how good a poet you really are Julie..

redzone

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Sensual and soft, warm and willing, this one whispers into the ear. Beautiful!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...a love poem, indeed...no scribble, nothing less! I loved the sensuality you weaved through this, Julie...truly mesmerizing.

[Pete]

very powerful. can feel the passionate connection flowing in that river. majestically effective. perfect imagery, both words & pic, capture beautifully. you always do such a wonderful job in the romance department.