Summer Rain

Tanhaaiyaan

A blank stare

Into the great fire of empty spaces

As I fall apart into shards

Of terrifying memories

Constantly yearning

A righteous companionship

And amidst the horrible trap

Of catastrophes and poignant moments

I long for my summer rain

 

A haunting gleam

Of self-destruction and terrible abyss

Constantly drowning

With violent stabs of solitude

I finally long to breathe

A desperate attempt to cling

To another unbroken soul

Amidst the slow motion

Of hands of a clock

I long for my summer rain

 

Author's Note

Thanks for the reviews.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too dear poet. The cold of Winter is dong me in. I need a warm Summer day. I enjoyed your words and thoughts in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[prachi prangya agasti]

Thanks so much....

[APOORVA]

wow!
clever writing with loop of emotions.
liked it

[prachi prangya agasti]

thank you...

[Leslie Philibert]

An excellent use of imagery that is comfortable in its association, well paced, good use of line length,
and..Tanhaaiyaan intrigues me ! Sounds great !

[prachi prangya agasti]

Tanhaaiyan is a hindi word in India for loneliness. Thank you..

[Giulia King]

"Constantly yearning
A righteous companionship"
A very beautiful poem, Prachi :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

Thank you....