Love is a Losing Game

Love is a Losing Game

A Poem by Jurikosan
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She walks up.
Asks if you love her.
You say yes as if you do
She fell  for you trick.
if love wears,
It's wared to fast
It was fake
I guess love doesn't last.

How long can she hold on?
She doesn't understand
Wish she would
He just sighs and holds her hand.

He smiles behind it all.
real or not
He doesn't care
But she's happy with what she's got.

Once he lost her.
He finally notices what he really lost.
Wasn't worth it.
wasn't happy with what he got.

You can't hold a girls heart by a thread.
Cant keep it locked.
Let it lose.
And keep it real.

Love can never last forever.
Once it starts it dies soon.
That's how our higher power has made it. don't change it.
Because our higher power decided love is a losing game.

© 2010 Jurikosan


Author's Note

Jurikosan
Hmm. yess :PPP

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"She fell for you[r] trick." And 'wared' means watchful, aware, so it doesn't really fit in this line " It's wared to fast". You begin with the stanza with "... love wears..." so maybe you could change it to something like "love has worn..."
Other than that, the topic is sad and heartfelt. Good read. I like that he notices what he's lost at the end.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thanks. I'll fix that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"She fell for you[r] trick." And 'wared' means watchful, aware, so it doesn't really fit in this line " It's wared to fast". You begin with the stanza with "... love wears..." so maybe you could change it to something like "love has worn..."
Other than that, the topic is sad and heartfelt. Good read. I like that he notices what he's lost at the end.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LIKIE ALOT
-wifey:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jurikosan

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