Decided and Done

I DON'T ALWAYS LISTEN

I DON'T BEHAVE

YOU ASKED FOR LOVE

AND SO I GAVE

AS MUCH AS YOU

WANTED

MORE THAN

YOU

DESERVED.

CONSIDER THIS

UNIQUELY

SERVED.

 

I DON'T ALWAYS LISTEN

I DON'T CONFORM

TO WHAT YOU WANT

AND SO I'M TORN

SO MUCH IS SPENT

COMPLETED

PERFORMANCE OVER

YOU'RE HAPPY?

SATED?

  

NOTHING LEFT

 

SUPREMELY

JADED.

 

kath nehls 5/3/08 :D

 

Reviews

[Lily1111]

Wonderful. So much emotion expressed here. I really like the way it flows and the rhymes are awesome!
You know, I don't listen, behave or conform either. It just always felt to me that if I change for someone else, each time I do, I am chipping away a little part of me and I become what they want me to be instead of who I am. I am very much a take me or leave me kinda woman. Eventually, you find someone who loves you for who you are and the only thing they want to change, is you last name. UBU

Great write!

[robin]

If my Jade were to visit
at such willful Temple
I would not whimper
as this "man" you left
well crumpled
I would only
giggle as you
helplessly fed
your hunger
and my insatiable
desire for your
incorrigible giving

Great stuff
nuff said

Robin