Dirty Girl Thoughts

Dirty Girl Thoughts

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
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Just a ponder...

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What do you do

when your boyfriend's friend

hits on you?

 

What do you do

when you're not sure now

if he is kidding?

What if he is not

kidding?

 

What do you do

when you would love to

know

how

it would be

to know...

that he wasn't

kidding.

 

 

Hmmmmm

 

 

Kath 8/29/08

© 2008 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge


Author's Note

SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
No, I couldn't possibly, no I am sure I couldn't possibly.

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Oh my. Yes, I do see the quandary you are facing. And actually I have lived this before. And have chosen both paths before. I would suppose it would depend on the amount of love that you feel for the current boyfriend, and also, whether you think he would make the same choice, if the same situation presented itself to him. Good luck, Kath.

Posted 11 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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AAHHH does she or doesn't she? Did she or didn't she???

Posted 9 Years Ago


What to do, what to do, as a sly smile appears on my face. Enjoyed. Phantom........

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Interesting thoughts for sure. The title caught my eye and since it made me smile it was worth the stop. lol Enjoyed. ty PS

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

tsk tsk. so many options.
by the way... in the title, is it the thoughts that are dirty, or the girl?

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Now that is an iteresting perdicament. Would love to be a fly on the wall to see how this turns out lol Nice write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No, of course you couldn't possibly... lmao... ok, so after about a month, how you doing with that?... still hanging on? This is a very funny piece, it's all you... what do you do?? *shrug* hmmmm... well, you write about it, what else can you do? lol Very nice, Kath.. hope all is well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tim, your officially out of the men's club...hehe ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, a great poem from a great artistic writer! I probally will get kick out of the men's club for this one but anyone as to put another into such a predicament is not much of a person in my books!
If he could do it to you he can and probablly also do it to another!
We call this clown a true player in life!
A very splendid well done poem to say the least!
Truly a great poem that does tend to bring the very worst and best out of one!
Good luck with all your future artstic works! You're a great poet!
Keep writing from your soul for the good of all souls!
Always,
TIM


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A quandary indeed. Sit on it, don't do anything, until you know what to do :)

I don't know if your quandary is for real but it made a fun poem. Life can be so complicated if we let it, best we try and keep it simple but that's not going to happen is it?!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Guess where your heart goes and follow it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

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