Under the Stars

Under the Stars

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

It was amazing

being held so tight

against your beating heart

so full of love and awesome strength

blending into my skin and my soul tonight.

The stars above twinkled down in a bright display

of light and a magical sense of being there just for me.

I will sleep like the very essence of you was made to make me melt.

© 2009 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge


Author's Note

SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
For Marc - as if this is where it all began...

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Nice I feel a lot of love there. That poem must be for some one special. I hoped you sent it to them. That last part I think you made a mistake. Any ways very nice.
Thank you good journey
Andrew

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :) Read something of mine and I will read something of yours - very nice and simple and what a way.. more..

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