Yes

Yes

A Poem by SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Today

I held my heart

in the palm of my hand

turned it round

to see

just where

it needs to be.

Cool

Like a shiny apple

or

maybe a magic 8 ball.

Closed my eyes

Asked the question

It said

This is right

So right.

© 2009 SPINNING ON that dizzy edge


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Cute and sweet little poem.



But I only follow my heart if God puts it upon
my heart as the heart can deceive us and trick us.

the heart isn't always right and isn't correct.

Thank you for sharing this and thank you for
you lovely review left on my page.

Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

9 Years Ago

this was just a whimsical thought I had one day and it took shape. thanks for your nice review
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

It's a pleasure. you're very welcome. Blessings. kindred poet



Reviews

Cute and sweet little poem.



But I only follow my heart if God puts it upon
my heart as the heart can deceive us and trick us.

the heart isn't always right and isn't correct.

Thank you for sharing this and thank you for
you lovely review left on my page.

Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

9 Years Ago

this was just a whimsical thought I had one day and it took shape. thanks for your nice review
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

It's a pleasure. you're very welcome. Blessings. kindred poet
Your heart is cool? That's not so good. It's one simple message which is good but shiny apple is random. Magic 8 ball fair enough, because your heart tells you what it wants.

Posted 9 Years Ago


SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

9 Years Ago

thank you for your thoughts
That is a great comparison... magic eight ball to the heart for you should always follow your heart... A beautiful little poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

LOL I have a magic 8 ball. I lovd the simple beauty of this poem. Enjoyed Phantom........

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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SPINNING ON that dizzy edge
SPINNING ON that dizzy edge

Buffalo, NY



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Some of my work is very personal and some is flight taking fancy... a writer's prerogative... :) Read something of mine and I will read something of yours - very nice and simple and what a way.. more..

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