Just A Dream

Just A Dream

K.S.

(a spoken word poem)

 

Until you I didn’t know what love was

I am love I am madness I am yours

No more sadness, pursue my love

I’m the girl that makes your blood course hard

Tell me the un-imaginable, the fantasies you carry

I believe we were one, together even way back when

I miss the passion, I miss the love making

Intimacy is all a part of being defenseless and so is caring

So I reached out to you innocent and naïve

Unravel me and fixate on me

Spread yourself on top of me, listen please

Talk to me possess my body and mind

I’ve felt your love as I’ve licked my teeth and cleared my throat

Yeah that’s right, you’ll come for me; I can see it clearly

God knows how much I’ve missed you

Can you remember the night our sheets went unstained

I cry as my smoke fills this room during the hours you won’t listen

Bring me back, put me to bed there.  Let me sleep.

When I wake in your arms it’s a peace I’ve never felt before

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Reviews

[Stefon Napier]

I'd love to hear this on an open mic night. You've done incredibly well with this. This honest let go of emotions that isn't overdone and doesn't get sappy. It is so realistic and genuine. Your another person I think will legendary because you talk about real situations regarding love. It isn't(I apologize if you happened to be at some point or still are) unedited diary material love. Its the raw real deal. As always, Keep going!

[K.S.78]

Yep 100% real rough and very raw! Ty! :)

[Simon Welsh]

That last line is adorable! I like.

[K.S.78]

lol thanks :blushing:

[Bryan_Himmel]

"I am love I am madness I am yours" set the tone for it, and without a doubt my favorite part. What is love without some madness? As always a great write and I am now at the point where when I see a read request from you I actually get that about to open a present feeling. Thank you as always for sharing your work, it is elegant, enrapturing, deep, and sweet in so many wonderful ways. I look forward to what you bring next.

[K.S.78]

Awe, thank you!

[Rahul]

Nice dream and the pic.'s nice and so beautiful...hey, is that you on the bed... ? lol :)
looking beautiful, ok,...ok...i'm not gonna wake you up, you can sleep till morning becomes night...lol :)
*kiddin*, that's reallly a nice write and i loved this piece, lines're good but again i wanna say, i'm really mad at the pic...or yeah, you can say at that sleeping beauty...lol :)
well penned :)

[K.S.78]

lol ty!

[Patrick O'Neil]

The opening 2 lines really sets the tone well. And it builds on the longing for the special person and the intimacy, that seems to be a memory or dream of some sort, when you close with: "Let me sleep.
When I wake in your arms it’s a peace I’ve never felt before". Really like it,it is a full circle for me and tells a great story love story.

[K.S.78]

You read it exactly as it was meant to be read! Thank you so much!

[Zero_Edge88]

Oh for what sight love is when it shines so deeply and reflects a light like no other. For what star out there shines so bright when it is really but the glimmer in your eye that shimmer. They send waves of heat and passion for that of the one that produces this beauty.

Oh for what love we think not of the thought but of the action it entails and one endeavors. For what adventure takes place and time to bloom and blossom so beautifully. This is an act of love one too few to notice and one too many to miss. As to what we perceive we receive it gratuitously because this is love and oh what it is to love but to love in the heart you have in your soul and universe.

So love your love like the stars that ride the cosmos and be guided by the light that is tremendously beautiful in your heart and soul. Magnanimous!

[K.S.78]

Magnanimous! ;)

[Zero_Edge88]

Thank you oh celestial muse! :)