Nothing Left to Ask

so here are some thoughts from a year ago - awakening and finally seeing the path forward ..

memories eclipsing moments
shadows singing lullaby's of the past
sunrise filled with a new dawns hope
stretching time to everlast
as we cast away illusion
traversing intrepidly alone
stripped bare of all learnt knowledge
the infinite beckoning us home
do we rise alongside the challenge?
can we clearly see the track?
moments creating fresh beginnings,
once we see, we shan’t turn back
crystal clear awareness
blooming flowers along the path
we continue on our journey
there be nothing left to ask

Reviews

[Cindy Marietta]

Love this! Especially the last two lines "we continue on our journey, there be nothing left to ask" applicable in so many circumstances. Awesome poem! Keep keeping on=]

[KWP]

thank you chick chick ... nothing left to ask :) LOVE xx

[Sleiman Azizi]

I enjoyed this.

I can't say I'm much of fan of rhyming in poetry but in this case it had me feeling as if I were walking along side you.

Well done.

[KWP]

if you are walking along side let me know ... we can chat :)

[Sleiman Azizi]

Oh, I'm over there, resting in the shade somewhere.

[KWP]

waiting for that moon I suppose ....

[Sleiman Azizi]

And my pizza.

[B.J]

Your work is amazing, well penned

[KWP]

thanks BJ and nice to meet you xx

[B.J]

You're most welcome

[A. Amos]

Wow! As always reading your work, is an honor!

[KWP]

hey you ... haven't been around in a while .. thanks for reading :)

[A. Amos]

Always pleasure my friend and you're most welcome!

[Einstein Noodle]

oh! i surely hope that we can see it .. are able to let go .. and follow that brilliant light of love :) i especially like the first four lines .. well done says i! one can apply your poem to many things .. but i like my first impressions that it is about approaching our physical death ... but i am an old man .. so my mind wanders such places ;)
E.

[KWP]

thanks E ... and we shall continue the flow onwards .... x x love

[Rene Salinas]

Shedding light to instances gone by and tomorrow bringing a sunrise filled with hope and faith. The illusion of happyness and pretty much all the rest that we think of as true as we always are surrounded by the presence of infinite wisdom. Do we listen to it? Do we really walk in a clear path? But the moment of clarity that allows us to reach certainty of thought will illumine and the path will appear.

Tred carefully then.

Thankyou

[KWP]

Hmmm ... tread carefully ... this has intrigued me ... why tread carefully when no matter what everything is always just as it is supposed to be ...

As always Rene ... I thank you for your words :) xx

[Rene Salinas]

Clarity is given by grace unless we are foolish enough to belive we do it. Grace needs treasuring hence treading carefully, don't waste it.... Thankyou KWP always a pleasure

[KWP]

ahhhaaa ok an interesting analogy and I see clearly where your thoughts travel ... treasured, lived, reminded and embodied in our everyday life so we realise that we don't need to become ... we already are ..

LOVE xx

[Chris]

I liked the rhythm overall. One stumble - Blossoming flowers along (the) path? New beginnings or a planned ending? The vagueness empowers questions...

[KWP]

thanks for pointing that out .. I had a re-read and changed a few things ... for the betterI hope :) ... xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Once we realize that questioning the past keeps us from answering our future then we are one the right path of knowledge.

[KWP]

cheers my friend ... interesting perception xx

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Cheers, and thank you, thank you very much.

[wordman]

moments creating new beginnings my favorite part

[KWP]

cheers my friend xx