Confusion of a Sane Mind

One of my favorite works. Came from one of my muses. A love I had long ago, and is a very good friend today. Confusions of a Sane Mind always wanting what I can't have.

Confusion of a Sane Mind 

She was nothing to me a year ago 
but that changed ever so slow 
she came in being so perfect to me 
changing my world indefintly 

I tried to stay sane 
while I lived through this pain 
looking at her throw the window pane 
hoping she looks my way (but it never worked) 

She changed my world ever so slow 
making me believe I should go 
and do something with my life 
making me wanna pick up that knife 

I tried to stay sane 
as I was put throught this pain 
others were watching me change 
wondering if I was going insane 

Confusions of a sane mind 
these things change the world everytime 
Confusions of a sane mind 
when the world knows they are not mine 

I wonder if I will ever change 
as I walk down memory lane 
thinking of the times we talked 
of the places we walked together 

Confusions of a sane mind 
making me go insane 
Confusions of a sane mind 
are these thoughts still mine

Author's Note

It is posted again. I had it on my original profile. I haven't used it in forever, and can't seem to get on it so I'm reposting my work.

Reviews

[Kayla]

I thought this was really good!! Very emotional and descriptive. I really can't find anything that needs improvement!!! SO VERY GOOD JOB!!!