Oh dear I know how words can be so bitter ,and cut through skin
through heart,pain even more than being stabbed with a sharp object
it hurts a lot ..i have been hurt a lot so i understand perfect what you mean
yes i wonder how some could be so cruel ,i guess it needs real talent
to hurt..sometimes i would like to hurt back,but i swear i always fail
its like i do want it badly ..to hurt but i just can not
that was a wonderful writing ..i could feel your pain so well
wonderful write...
Wow ! This poem is heavy , heavy. I love it. going through major life changes.This really draws me in , i wish you would keep it the same and dont change a thing! Great write
Oh dear I know how words can be so bitter ,and cut through skin
through heart,pain even more than being stabbed with a sharp object
it hurts a lot ..i have been hurt a lot so i understand perfect what you mean
yes i wonder how some could be so cruel ,i guess it needs real talent
to hurt..sometimes i would like to hurt back,but i swear i always fail
its like i do want it badly ..to hurt but i just can not
that was a wonderful writing ..i could feel your pain so well
wonderful write...
This is a well written poem that I believe truly describes the pain one feels. I really enjoyed reading it, and knew exactly what you were talking about.
I disregard the proportions, the measures, the tempo of the ordinary world. I refuse to live in the ordinary world as ordinary women. To enter ordinary relationships. I want ecstasy.. more..