Fathers' Art

Fathers' Art

A Poem by Onyx Sky

 

A daughter looks at her father
“Father, what is poetry?”
He replies:
“My daughter.”

© 2008 Onyx Sky


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I'm sorry!
But I can't BELIEVE YOU!!!

Girl you are something else...
You're a poet and you can't help it ... it's your talent ... your craft ... its who you are!

EXCELLENT!

I came because I LOVE my father and I think he's the best man in the whole wide world and you summed his love for me with two words...

AMAZING!
I LOVE YOU STYLE!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hi Sweetie, How very nice to find your friends request in my mail and I will be going to hit the accept button in just a minute. This is the first of your titles I have clicked on and absolutely loved it. I write lots for and about my love of family also. Enjoyed your bio. I try to visit often but after I accept your friends request please don't give up on me, because I will show up when you least expect it. LOL Life has a rather firm grip on me right now.

Blessings,
Lesa

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very sweet. An excellent characterisation of a meaningful bond. Well said.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so touching and sweet, yet straight to the point. nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry!
But I can't BELIEVE YOU!!!

Girl you are something else...
You're a poet and you can't help it ... it's your talent ... your craft ... its who you are!

EXCELLENT!

I came because I LOVE my father and I think he's the best man in the whole wide world and you summed his love for me with two words...

AMAZING!
I LOVE YOU STYLE!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As a father I can just say you hit the nail on the head. I really love it! Part of the strength of it is in its simplicity. No fluff, just truth.

Excellent!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Onyx Sky
Onyx Sky

Raeford, NC



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