Surreal

    

 

I sat inside your love today

And your spirits' rays caught mine

I think  I've met you somewhere before... deja vu

Maybe in a past life?

Because I think I've fallen for you

Many times before..

Serendipity?

I can't,

Describe...

I've never felt so safe

Knowing there's no escape

I linger in your translucent glow

It's like-

Your touch, it sends telepathic lightning bolts through me

Passion flows through my body and trickles down into my fingertips

And tears dwindle away

For once I can feel free

For once I feel alive 

Reborn

I can feel you inside of me

I want to savor this feeling for all eternity

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Onyx Sky,

This is a wonderful write. You do a wonderful job of summarizing your feellings. Often your choice of words are just excellent. I particularly like the opening line: "I sat inside your love today". What a perfect choice to show how enveloped you became in the experience and how you breathed in the love. Very nice.

Very best regards,

Rick

[Jenna]

I liked this alot. The picture is awesome. It reminds me of the nightmare before christmas. Past lives. God those beliwilders me. I swear I will sit there and ponder stuff like that forever. I think I was a chick pirate back in the day. But you captured this really good. If your into that type of thing then I recommend reading The Bluebloods series.