Waiting

blog/poem/....???

 Waiting for someone to get lost

In the depth of my words

I think I'll be waiting for a while

My thoughts are beginning to whither

Like a Rose cut for a holiday

Only lasting for a moments stay

Because I constantly put my heart into it

And it goes unrecognized

Sometimes I wish I had a different gift

Guitar, Violin, Mathematician

Because it seems like my writing is always up for castigation

Never positive recognition

Why can't I write and have it come out like a melody

Then it would be easier to judge

No interpretations

Just unique harmony

I just got to keep writing because it pleases me

I gotta keep writing

It sets me free

Author's Note

it just is... random thoughts not really for critique, just speaking my mind

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

yes you do go on writing my friend..yes sometimes the harmony is lost
the magic and the feelings in the words are lost..the depth of words is no longer there
like your inner feelings are on holiday..and you feel like your heart is not all into it
but i read you some which had all the things you said and told about,the harmony and all ..
so it seems it may take time to get back the magic i once read for you..
never give up ,its always there..it will suddenly erupt..
i know well what you mean ,never get sad
you will suddenly start to sing in the lovliest harmony..
lovely write

[Markymark]

Then I won't critique it. It is a wonderful read nonetheless.....I think we all feel the same way at one time or another. Writing is like that....It ebbs and flows. I think you must be a musician.....I sense it, but there's an artist of words in there as well.

Markymark

[Meredith Leigh]

Yes, please keep on writing! You shoudn't feel that way! because in a poem, talking about how it isn't getting recoginzed, I am recognizing it! & very positivley. I really liked this, how you wrote about a feeling like this, and still kept it poetic and with nice flow. Good job!

- Kriss

[Kandii]

I likes it. =D