Goodbye my love !

Goodbye my love !

A Poem by Loner

Its better to die then to live without your lover ....

                                    Goodbye my love !

I have escaped from my solitary confinement after running
For miles and miles  am standing in front of you, gasping for
Breath my eyes are fixed on you so that i can capture your
Image in my dead, numb brain because nothing is left off me

After knowing that nothing can materialize of our story i
Have come too see you, do not ask me where i will go
From here, or what will become of me?
No questions asked just turning away from you with tears

Gushing from my eyes i keep staring at you while i start too walk away from you, taking steps backwards, your voice does not make sense to me anymore, i am hysterical and shattered it seems as if i am tearing my heart away from my chest,

will i be able to live Like this, and for how long?
i do not know neither do i want to know, i just know one
Thing that i am getting separated from you, i will fight with my Fate till I am alive that why did i ever meet you? if we are

not made for each other, i try to gulp my suffocation down but all In vain, blood starts to seep out of my mouth the poison works its way spreading through my veins, my he
ad spins, my eyes stop focusing I run for my life blindly when I suddenly

trip over a stone and i land on the floor but before that you hold me in your arms i suddenly feel so sleepy i can hardly focus on you I only manage to whisper 
goodbye My love!

© 2012 Loner

Author's Note

Life without your lover is like eating thorns and drinking acid
tried to portray that image in my poetry... Hope u like it.

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Your talent is amazing. A masterfully penned poem

Posted 6 Years Ago

I like the narrative flow of this - like a stream of consciousness. The feelings of the abandoned lover come across powerfully, as always in your writing... the intensity and anguish are very real... and flow from the inner passion that boils within you...

The writing is deeply affecting to this reader...

Posted 7 Years Ago

Described it perfectly my dear!

Posted 8 Years Ago

That question of, is there a purpose or some deep meaning related to us meeting someone out of nowhere...we always ask...I think there must be in some way...

what a heartfelt poem...totally written with style and substance...terrific :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Tragically beautiful. A very heart tugging piece. Well written dear.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 1, 2012
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