Destiny

Destiny

A Poem by Luna Northstar
"

The theory of the world.

"
New beginnings
Are the result 
Of painful endings.

And painful endings
Are unavoidable
Because new beginnings,

End.

© 2011 Luna Northstar


Author's Note

Luna Northstar
Wasn't in the best mood when I wrote this ... it's short and simple... What do you think?

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Wow...this is...yknow, actually really deep. You've barely scratched the surface of a greater story, the stories of generations upon generations. You've told the stories of those who wish to speak, but fear stops them from doing so. You've taken the voices of those who have wanted to say this and mixed it with your own to create a powerful piece overflowing with mixed emotions.

*deep inhale*

Great job as always :) 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Quietly profound. Short and sharp. So I will keep my review like that.
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Posted 8 Years Ago


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Well, my comment is EXTREMELY late. I loved the very true message. Guess this proves quality of quantity. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think it's short, but that's the beauty of it, with a very wise message, and meaning behind it... It needs nothing more or less, just perfect.

E.L.

Posted 9 Years Ago


:0 Karalynn i loved this poem it was super deep and its just a great poem!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow...this is...yknow, actually really deep. You've barely scratched the surface of a greater story, the stories of generations upon generations. You've told the stories of those who wish to speak, but fear stops them from doing so. You've taken the voices of those who have wanted to say this and mixed it with your own to create a powerful piece overflowing with mixed emotions.

*deep inhale*

Great job as always :) 100/100

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Luna Northstar
Luna Northstar

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I go by the name Luna Northstar and take my writing very seriously. I've grown out of my teenage angst poetry writing phase and I'm focusing on my novel "It's Alice", though I tend to write a few shor.. more..

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